It’s not that funny or as grand, just not that big of a deal unless you are here.
I have this big part of me that has become you.
It’s not a phone call or a promise of tonight.
It is needing you here with all of my might.
I can not think or concentrate.
‘Til I have you by my side.
Cause it’s part of me that’s missing.
How am I supposed to see without my eyes?
Or run without my legs?
Because my heart can’t beat when I’m all alone.
It misses you that’s me.
Together.
That is where you are supposed to be.
Reblogged this on Randomly Told and commented:
Sajak ini cocok untuk disandingkan dengan quotes dari Sudjiwo Tejo yang pernah aku baca di internet. Kalo nggak salah inti dari quotes beliau adalah, puncak dari kangen yang sesungguhnya adalah ketika dua orang yang tidak bertemu namun diam-diam saling mendoakan.
Menurutku ya, kangen yang sebenarnya adalah ketika seseorang merindukan pasangannya tapi tidak bertemu (atau memang sedang tidak bisa bertemu) namun dalam hati selalu mendoakan orang yang disayanginya. Kalo dia jodoh, maka kembalikan dia ya Allah, tapi kalo bukan jodohku maka berikanlah kami petunjuk dan jadikan kami teman yang baik π
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Wow. I like this poetry, you expressed the feeling about someone is missing someone special very well. Keep writing! π
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Thank you so much for the reblog! Happy saturday!!! βΊοΈ
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Love it! Carry on.
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Love, love, love it! You are so creative & talented
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πthanksπ
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I am so sorry you are missing your beloved one.
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Thank you π we are together now. Wrote it when he was gone last weekend. Two days can seem so long! π β€οΈlove.
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Caroline, thank you for following my blog at Keeping-Company.com
I really take delight in the hopefulness of yours! Thanks, and keep writing! π
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Thank you π
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A wonderful poem, and I’m glad to here he’s back, and all is well once more. God bless.
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I love this. You said it so well it was more like I was watching the scene unfold instead of reading. Beautiful! Hugs
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Thank you! Hugs! π
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Beautiful poem – well done π
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Thank you! π
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That’s a good poem and i’m glad he’s back.
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thank you and me too!
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Love it!
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This is very touching and creative, I am glad the separation was only temporary. This touched me because it spoke to my feelings about my Dad who passed away March 2014. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift.
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Thank you for being so kind! I am so very sorry that you lost someone you loved. So hard! I am glad the memory of him is a good one π
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